August 10, 2004
A nonessential scene:
EXT. TRAIN STATION -- DAY
The nameless TEENAGE GIRL walks with her parents out onto the platform; they all carry bags over their shoulders. She looks back down at the street, her eyes darting here and there until she catches sight of her boyfriend, watching from the corner of an adjacent building, shuffling his feet. His hands jammed in his pockets.
She sees him and offers a little wave -- diminished so that her parents don't notice -- and mouths a silent goodbye.
He waves back, watching her from the corner of his eyes.
Posted by David Lowery at August 10, 2004 3:04 AM